A moment in time

This week for writing we wrote about a moment in time. First we looked at a photo of some boys playing in water and talked lots about it. We thought of lots of different adjectives. Then we came up with some ideas and wrote them down to make a story with Mrs Ware.

We tried to use as many adjectives as we could, and some simile, and some WOW words, and some conjunctions. 

Then we had a go writing out own moment in time story using the same sentence starters. After we had finished we shared our writing with a buddy. They told us 2 things they liked about our story (2 stars) and something they wish we would add to make it even better (1 wish)

The next day we went back and made some changes. Then Mrs Ware read our stories and gave them 2 stars and a wish. 

On Thursday we chose our favourite sentence and published it to go on the wall. Come into class sometime to have a look! (more to be out up as they are finished!)

Next week we will do a new one with a different picture :)